Thursday, 30 June 2016

pae tamariki 2016

WALT: performing arts


DESCRIPTION: this is a photo of pae tamariki (a kapa haka event) I'm the skinny one on the left 

EVALUTION: an green



Wednesday, 29 June 2016

sport start assessment





WALT: strike and field the ball

DESCRIPTION: This is my sports start evaluaion and photos (caid)

feedback I think the evaluation is choice (caid)

feedforward you could have made the description longer

EVALUATION: I think a orange





Tuesday, 28 June 2016

myths and legends

WALT: make our own stories about our own constellations

DESCRIPTION: this is my story board and drawings of the legend of fenhir the wolf

EVALUATION: maybe green

this is the success criteria

  • Add detail, through actions or the way you stand
  • make sure your story makes sense
  • descriptive language
  • tell the story in the right order
  • Beginning, middle and the end
  • expression
  • have a clear voice
  • Be creative
  • involve your audience
  • practice
  • Good pace, take your time but not too much time
  • Use a few props
  • Scene
  • Eye contact with the audience
  • building suspense
  • changing your voice





Sunday, 26 June 2016

te reo



WALT: write our own te reo stories

DESCRIPTION: this is my story called Haere mai ki te kai

EVALUATION: I really like it and I was the first to finish so I think a green

FEEDBACK: GREAT
FEEDFORWARD:GREAT BUT NEXT TIME ADD MORE JOKES

Tuesday, 14 June 2016

my science

WALA: space

DESCRIPTION: this is my model of my science investigation and this is the system called wolf 1061. I really really enjoyed researching the systems and stuff this much.this is how much I loved the research.

EVALUATION: a green target

FEEDBACK: I think its great and i love how you liked the research

FEEDFORWARD:I think the picture of the model could be clearer