Wednesday, 13 April 2016

two stars and a wish

1 star. I’m proud of my swimming sports because I got into northern cluster.
2 star. I’m proud of my family tree because everyone said it was marvelous

3 wish. Practice my maori language more.

WALT- reflect our learning.

DESCRIPTION- this is my two stars and a wish for the term.
EVALUATION- only orange I think

FEEDBACK-I think that your stars were a good choice.


FEEDFORWARD-I think that all you need to do Is put a bit more detail.

Tuesday, 12 April 2016

plan of reading task

WALT- be creative by creating an invention from the story

DESCRIPTION- this is the plan for my quad bike I'm making in sketchup. It is from a story called Into The Cold.

EVALUATION- maybe a orange target.

FEEDBACK- I think you explained what you are going to do very well.
FEEDFORWARD-I think that all you need is cappitals.

Thursday, 7 April 2016

two stars and a wish

 WALT- writing two stars and a wish.


                                                                              DESCRIPTION- this is my two stars and a wish. the                                                                               two stars mean two things you have done well and                                                                                   the wish means something you want to do.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                   EVALUATION- I think I should get orange.
                                                                             
                                                                              FEEDBACK- i think that you did really well.
                                                                              FEEDFORWARD- i think that you need to work on
                                                                              evaluation.

Tuesday, 5 April 2016

W.A.L.A- our whakapapa

DESCRIPTION- this is my family tree  and the sentences

Ko Mason au

Ko Ethan raua ko Sam aku tukana

Ko Jake raua ko Luke oku kaihana

Ko Jack raua ko Agnes oku kaihana

Ko Edith oku kaihana

Ko Joanna toku mama

Ko Terry toku papa

Ko Rebecca raua ko claire oku whaea keke

Ko Daniel toku matua keke

Ko Tricia toku kuia

Ko Lawrence råtou ko Stewart, ko Martin ngå tipuna tane o toku kuia

Ko Janelle råtou ko Vicki, ko Kurtis, ko Justine, ko Francine, ko Kelsey, ko Kimberley, ko Joshua ngå kaihana o toku måmå   

Ko Richard toku tipuna tane

Ko Etty toku tipuna wahine