Sunday, 8 March 2015

Writing

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“Characters”

WALT: Entertain (character description)

Task:

Think of a character you could write about. 

Draw them.  

Introduce your character in an entertaining way. 

Describe their looks.  

Describe their personality.  

I think/feel statement (Conclusion / Summary) 


Criteria: I can

Self Assessment


Descriptive vocabulary (words that help to SHOW the reader)

  • use a range of verbs 

Language features (phrases that help paint a picture) 

  • select one or two similes 

  • use onomatopoeia to show sounds 

  • select words that start with the same sound (alliteration) 

My writing is 2-3 paragraphs (100 - 200 words) 


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The Battle of the Giants.
The giants were mean and ugly and fearless creatures. They hated the humans.
The giants were as tall as ten mountains on top of each other. Their heads were as big as Mars. The Giants muscles are as big as Pluto. The Giants were dumb. One giant tried to walk over the sea, he jumped on a sea snake and died. Another tried to fly, a meteor hit his head and he died. I'm glad their dead.


Sunday, 1 March 2015

Welcome to my blog


WALT Inform (entertaining and persuading our audience to visit our blog)

- welcome to our blog!
- show pictures of some of your learning (butterflies etc.)
- who are you friends?
- things you like (paper planes!)
- places we like to play
- 45seconds

What did I do well?
I think the dancing skeleton entertains everyone.

What could I work on?

I could work on putting everything in the right place.