I am learning to persuade.
This Is my writing about chemicals. I was trying to persuade the government to sell real chemicals because chemicals are not that bad.
How do you think you you went?
I think I did well because my mum said I was doing year six work.
What do you think you should do better next time?
Not using the same word at the start of the next sentence.
What are you proud of?
The way it turned out.